Crazy In The Rain

VERSE 1
Jump up for the sky
As everyday is better than the last
A peaceful tear you cry
That falls with the force of a blast
Carrying all of your cares away
Clearing up your dark side
Bringing forth a brighter day
To be taken in your stride
You may not be a picture perfect
But your always worth it

CHORUS
Lose control of yourself
Let go of your hell
Gotta go and run away
Forget everything and runaway
Go Crazy in the Rain
Washing you clear of all your pain

VERSE 2
This moment is perfect
Don't let it pass you by
It's happiness inside you're feeling
Happiness making you sigh
Pray for it to stay
The warmth of life and all it brings
Don't let it slip away
Breaking all the strings
That once had you tied
Broken up inside

REFRAIN

VERSE 3
There's nothing left to say
There's nothing left to do
There's no other way
To free you
There's nowhere left to go
There's nobody left to fear
Because you now know
You can stay right here
With Me,Together Forever!

CHORUS 2
Lose control of yourself
Let go of your hell
Gotta go and run away with me
Forget them all and runaway with me
We'll go Crazy in the Rain
Without any of our pain

Love this!Especially verse 3.I'd write out all the lyrics,it's easy to simply skip it,when you just write "refrain" "chorus" etc.It may be more work,but I think it's worth it.It's up to you,I'm just trying to help you get the best reaction possible.Update:May I ask the tempo or "vibe"you had in mind for verse 3? I get a bluesy,powerful- attitude type thing,if you get my meaning.Am I far off from what you had in mind?

Originally Posted by Doug Denslowe

Love this!Especially verse 3.I'd write out all the lyrics,it's easy to simply skip it,when you just write "refrain" "chorus" etc.It may be more work,but I think it's worth it.It's up to you,I'm just trying to help you get the best reaction possible.

i hear ya i will do in future thanks for the compliment yeah verse 3 is one of my favourite parts too <3

Originally Posted by Doug Denslowe

Love this!Especially verse 3.I'd write out all the lyrics,it's easy to simply skip it,when you just write "refrain" "chorus" etc.It may be more work,but I think it's worth it.It's up to you,I'm just trying to help you get the best reaction possible.Update:May I ask the tempo or "vibe"you had in mind for verse 3? I get a bluesy,powerful- attitude type thing,if you get my meaning.Am I far off from what you had in mind?

i meant to say:yeah u hv verse 3 spot on nicely spotted

Good stuff Santana, enjoyed this a lot. well worded and I like the chorus too. The only nit I had was the "a" before "picture perfect"...I would loss it but that's just my opinion. Not much to crit on this. Very good write.

Originally Posted by Santana Lonergan

i meant to say:yeah u hv verse 3 spot on nicely spotted

I'm glad I was right!If I had been wrong I'd rethink my opinions on all songs I "thought I knew what I was talking about!"

Originally Posted by LooknGlass

Good stuff Santana, enjoyed this a lot. well worded and I like the chorus too. The only nit I had was the "a" before "picture perfect"...I would loss it but that's just my opinion. Not much to crit on this. Very good write.

i meant the "a" before "picture perfect" to refer to each individual,as nobody is one picture that is perfectly painted! u get me? :\ thanks though

Santana, this is just exactly what A Good Song should be like to me. Thanks for this grande post!

You keep amazing me. Can't wait for follow ups!

Originally Posted by amaryn

Santana, this is just exactly what A Good Song should be like to me. Thanks for this grande post!

You keep amazing me. Can't wait for follow ups!

wow! thank you very much ur gonna love wats to come cause i know i do

Still and again rereading this I realize that any day I should hesitate to be optimistic, this is the poem I should read
to start and feel better. THANKS ever so much!

Loved it. Makes me want to dance in the rain.

"Breaking all the strings
That once had you tied
Broken up inside"

These lines gave depth to Verse 2. Amazing work.