HARDCORE/ROCK - 'Black & Blue Oceans' (would like honest reviewing)

ReadME
This song is about not fitting in, in today’s society as the ‘oddball’
The strange kid who just wants a break in life.
I deal with my own demon in that of the way of self-harm.
This song is a reflection of my self harm, dealing with breakup and finding calm by the ocean.

Black and Blue Oceans -
All my bruises leave a distant memory,
Every mark, every fickle blemish still fades away with every day.
Every ****ing day a brand new scar, you’re all what’s made of who you are.
A brand new day a brand new start, grab everything and raise the bar.

I will swim these killer seas
I will jump and climb mountains
Where oceans might be.

(BRING ME BACK TO BEAUTY)

So take me back to where my skin blends in,
To finally where I know that I’ll fit in.
Bring me back to the water’s edge.
SO TAKE ME BACK TO THE WATERS EDGE.

-possible break down transition-
Am i overstepping my bounds?
Am I overstepping my bounds?
Or is it just my life that’s hit the ground?

So take me back to where my skin blends in,
To finally where I know that I’ll fit in.
Bring me back to the water’s edge.
SO TAKE ME BACK TO THE WATERS EDGE.


Picking up the pieces now there’s nothing between us,
Will I remember you?
Every single ****ing day you were all that I knew.
Is this the only way? Will it be easier if you don’t see what I’ve been through?
So I cover my marks, cover my arms shrug off the cold and walk outside alone.
Will I ever find what I call home?
Take me back to beauty just so I can see it again,
Infinite blue, where there will be no end.

Good self-expression. You're not alone. I'm 67 and still don't fit in.

Ralzan, you expressed yourself in a horrifying, honest way and it asks for a moment of silence.
Selfharm is nothing to be taken for granted and I acknowledge your sincerity.
You used some great lines for it, right to the heart:
I will swim these killer seas
I will jump and climb mountains
where oceans might be

I'm impressed, and wish you nothing but courage!

Thabks for your support man I gues im so stuck in my own little box a never really thought about what someone would think about behind the lyrics.
Really sort of brought me back to reality seeing your post

Beautifully written, leaves you very vulnerable, which is courageous. I know these feelings unfortunately, but I know that it can only get better. On a writers note, it's excellent and it's always an extension of your creative mind, so keep it up. You have excellent writing skills.