All I Need

In the valley
of distant dreams
Of distant stars
Of colliding realities
I found life
In the shadow of a dream
In the hope within me
I found all that I need
"Chorus"
I found you
Sitting all alone
I found truth
Where I did not belong
And I wondered why
Would I ever disguise
The truth inside
When all I need is you


In the morning dew I rise
Searching for my disguise
Hiding from the truth
Hiding from you
Cause I know that I'm wrong
I know that I'm not that strong
To stand here alone
To stand without you
Then...
"Chorus"
I found you
Sitting all alone
I found truth
Where I did not belong
And I wondered why
Would I ever disguise
The truth inside
When all I need is you
"Bridge"
You're all I need
You're all I need
You in my arms
Is everything to me
I need to stop searching
For someone else to be
I need to see what really matters
I need to see the truth inside of me
"Chorus"
I found you
Sitting all alone
I found truth
Where I did not belong
And I wondered why
Would I ever disguise
The truth inside
When all I need is you

Wow!!! That song can T A L K!!! It hit me straight in the heart. First verse and choures is damn right perfect...needs no more worke. The second verse is also good,maybe some adjustments to the last four lines,to get a smoother transaction to the ch. but this is great work! This song you have to promise me that you'll let me hear with music and vocals! Excited!!!!

Oh yeah I will let you know when I write the music and record it. Check out some more of my songs and poems I have like 100 posted sometimes I just throw stuff on here cause I'm bored so some are better than others. Thank you for the comment. Also check out JoshD he just posted another song him and I are gonna be making music together.

You're back in the saddle again!Fine work,my poetic friend!

Well this is wonderful my love! Very very beautiful. :')