The Devils Right Hand

Thread: The Devils Right Hand

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  1. RalZan said:

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    The Devils’ Right Hand

    It’s the symbol you bare,
    And it’s always there. Death is my only salvation from here,
    All of this, is it because you don’t care?

    [Chorus]
    When I see the devil can’t help but stare,
    He watches me quietly descending the stairs.
    I walk through his hallways of death no exit from here.
    He judges me harshly and exploits all my fears.
    And I don’t dare to ask him the reason I’m here.
    [End chorus]

    Soul trapped in oblivion,
    I‘ve reached my despair.

    -THIS IS MY ETERNAL-

    You made me your soldier I’m at it again,
    Just give me the order so I can begin.
    I serve as your demon, my soul you can’t cleanse.
    Scratch away slowly and tear at the seams.
    I wander with evil and destroy all your dreams.

    -THIS IS MY ETERNAL… THE DEVIL WATCHES MY EVERY MOVE!-

    [Chorus]

    The devil watches my every move,
    We run ‘devils night’ with something to prove.
    Storming through the fields of ashes.
    My eyes change from green to grey,
    With sharpened blades we’ll own this day.
    Old world dramas are todays decay.
    While battle worn I’m still battle torn.
    Fighting in a war in which I was born for.
    Life sucks in a beautiful kind of way
     
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    amaryn said:

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    "my eyes turn grom green to grey
    with sharpened blades we'll own this day"



    great line! I like this very much, though it's "dark poetry"
     
  3. The Obscured said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by amaryn View Post
    "my eyes turn grom green to grey
    with sharpened blades we'll own this day"



    great line! I like this very much, though it's "dark poetry"

    Dark poetry...excellent description of this. I agree completely...and it's beautiful. Looking forward to more.
    We're a little bit stranger on the inside
     
  4. RalZan said:

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    thanks so much
    Life sucks in a beautiful kind of way
     
  5. basslabmechanic87 said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by RalZan View Post
    The Devils’ Right Hand

    It’s the symbol you bare,
    And it’s always there. Death is my only salvation from here,
    All of this, is it because you don’t care?

    [Chorus]
    When I see the devil can’t help but stare,
    He watches me quietly descending the stairs.
    I walk through his hallways of death no exit from here.
    He judges me harshly and exploits all my fears.
    And I don’t dare to ask him the reason I’m here.
    [End chorus]

    Soul trapped in oblivion,
    I‘ve reached my despair.

    -THIS IS MY ETERNAL-

    You made me your soldier I’m at it again,
    Just give me the order so I can begin.
    I serve as your demon, my soul you can’t cleanse.
    Scratch away slowly and tear at the seams.
    I wander with evil and destroy all your dreams.

    -THIS IS MY ETERNAL… THE DEVIL WATCHES MY EVERY MOVE!-

    [Chorus]

    The devil watches my every move,
    We run ‘devils night’ with something to prove.
    Storming through the fields of ashes.
    My eyes change from green to grey,
    With sharpened blades we’ll own this day.
    Old world dramas are todays decay.
    While battle worn I’m still battle torn.
    Fighting in a war in which I was born for.
    Have you read Dante's Inferno?
     
  6. chawla283 said:

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    Great and interesting poetry....