I Quit

VERSE 1
Surrender and give in
To the life you live in
Release the poison
Watch it flow freely
Fractions of a broken shard
That extinguish the fire
Burning a dark crimson
In an engulfed prison

CHORUS
Break and fall to the floor
Fight because you wanted more
Sick of running away
So put everything on display
Coming for it
For my forfeit

VERSE 2
Just like the stars align
God gives a single sign
Get to safer ground
A land of pure repent
Cleanse your blood of poison
And rid you of me
No matter what ground you walk on
You will never be strong

CHORUS
Break and fall to the floor
Fight because you wanted more
Sick of running away
So put everything on display
Coming for it
For my forfeit

VERSE 3
The blood I have spilled
The souls I have killed
Does not compare
To what I have in store for you
So when you find that door
And can't take no more
When you want to end it
And want my forfeit
Do whatever you see fit
While you keep running around
I'll keep gunning you down
Stand and be your own defender
And don't ever surrender

CHORUS
Break and fall to the floor
Fight because you wanted more
Sick of running away
So put everything on display
Coming for it
For my forfeit

CHORUS 2
Heal and rise from the floor
You got all you wanted and more
Stop running away
You're off of display
You've got my forfeit
I said it, I quit!

This is definitely my kind of writing. Do you have music to this? If so, may we hear?!

EDIT: Shameless ad...given your style of writing, you may enjoy my stuff. Check it out if you have time.

Originally Posted by The Obscured

This is definitely my kind of writing. Do you have music to this? If so, may we hear?!

EDIT: Shameless ad...given your style of writing, you may enjoy my stuff. Check it out if you have time.

thanks this was my first time tryin a song like this :\ wer i jump from one person to myself in the song,i was hoping to make it an easy change for the reader u know? not too difficult to follow! did i manage that right? :\ yeah ill b sure to check it out thanks