Help with title would be appreciated

went for a run today and saw some amazing views, but then came across a plaque for war veterans and it got me thinking of the destruction of the beauty id seen before hand, i know they where protecting us and fair play to them for that, im just saying its a shame they had to destroy so much. enjoy !!


Wind flies through these trees
Faces shaped by my minds eye
Whispering forgotten secrets
Of fallen men that lay side by side

Forest shaped by war and terror
Destructive pathways slice through the growth
Swirling, winding, coiling, rambling
Ending in loses for them both

We get the four seasons to keep the balance
They say good things come in three
We get two natural mothers guidance
Got given one world and its master key

Concrete jungle forever the same
Ruinous mentality brainwashed at birth
No wonder natures fighting back
Giving others there right full turn

Building battered to the ground
Boulders imbedded to the dirt
Blasting there way with no regard
For the children’s future they’ve just hurt

We get the four seasons to keep the balance
They say good things come in three
We get two natural mothers guidance
Got given one world and its master key

Crying faces amongst the crowds
Given no choice about this battle
No opting out this kind of war
Forever dying are the poor

So I say give the world back to nature
Let her right our endless wrongs
Start a new, in peace and harmony
Let only war exist in songs

Key of Harmony?

Hi, im new here

First of all this is an awesome piece! Well done.

As for a title, i would say "Four seasons keep the balance".

Keep it up!

Seu

firstly id like to welcome seu to allthelyrics and also thank you both for the good idea on the title im gunna see if any more people have any other advice and suggestions before making my mind up but thanks again

Idk why, but the first thing that comes to mind is "Harmed Forces"... kinda an interesting play on words. Anyway, nice piece!

Face of War

thanks for the ideas peeps and i really love harmed forces ... clever and effective

hi seu! Welcome too. Yep, both the Poetry thread and the Lyrics Review thread are worth following.
Keep checking them out, will you?