Don't !

Thread: Don't !

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  1. Tomatomic said:

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    when i go, i never stop
    i'm like a mother-F**king juggernaut.
    a little short of temper;
    and yet quick to rage
    i won't be held by a human cage
    built like a truck
    with the force of a train
    don't you dare laugh
    i feel no pain.

    Give it all you've got..

    Don't stare at me
    don't mess with me
    don't try **** with me
    don't, don't, Don't!

    take one look, it's all you get
    before i knock you down, you're dead
    i'm going in for the kill,
    too fast, too low
    you never stood a chance you f**king fool

    taken out while you pray..

    Don't stare at me
    don't mess with me
    don't dare f**k with me
    don't, don't, Don't!
    DON'T DO IT!!!!

    don't try sucker, i'll warn you once
    here comes your death man, coming hot
    meteor strikes the weak man down
    it's not me so it's your f**king turn!!!

    Don't stare at me
    don't mess with me
    don't try **** with me
    don't, don't, Don't!
    DON'T F**KING DO IT!!!!
     
  2. Doug Denslowe's Avatar

    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Atomic One........FINANALLY!!!You write a song that is IMO a hit and has everything a great song needs;rhymes,rhythm and a great hook!I was hoping I'd Like this song,it's been awhile since you wrote something I could feel good about commenting on!Bravo,Dude!
     
  3. Tomatomic said:

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    cheers doug it's been awhile since i wrote anything good!!!1