My song

Its a never ending story
With only love and glory
Even after the darkest days
i will bounce back into my ways ohhhhh ohhhhh,
its a never ever lasting story ohhhhh ohh, never ever lasting story
One day when i see you, your walking im wondering how
How your doing without meee
Its a never ever a lasting storyyy x2
When i see you looking at her
I walk away like oh ohhh ohhhh
You’ll never see me again oh ohh
What you think ill be like without you, i bet you love it, (don’t you) x2
Every single day i think about you, i bet you never ever seem to notice
What im like with out you in my world
Its a never ever lasting story with no love and with no glory its a pain its a tragic story but ill live on without you
I said ill live on without you
Even though you broke my heart i still forgave you
Even though you told my friends i hate you, when i look into your eyes i cry a little then i remember the things you did to me
Its a never ever lasting story with no love just pain and glory ill love you forever thats final but in the end i know ill never be yours oh ohhhh
Ill never be yours
The end



this is my song, it only took me about 3 minutes so i know its bad, but it lasts about 2.15 minutes i sang it to see but i cant sing aha

wow 3 minutes well spent you got any chords and tune in mind for it ?? would like to hear how you imagined it

thanks, and no not yet I might ask my music teacher if i could borrow some of his instruments for it
I don't own any instruments aha

sweet well if you do you should post a youtube clip

I like this,I only wish you wrote in the traditional way;verse,chorus,etc.That being said,I look forward to your next song.

thanks, and ill take that in mind next time, i was going to but then i decided not to .

Originally Posted by Henryb

thanks, and ill take that in mind next time, i was going to but then i decided not to .

The easier you make your posts appear,the more feedback you'll garner.I think.........