Naser Zeynali - Eshghe Man

Salam! Bazam mano I tried to translate this song to exercise my Farsi and I need your precious help, if you want Kheyli khoshhalam misham age tarjome ino bebini va tarshihesh koni Merciiiii

http://www.iransong.com/g.htm?id=42639

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وقت رفتنت حرف هام رو گوش کن
Vaghte raftanet harf ham ro goosh kon
When it heard all your words of farewell (raftane = departure/leaving?)

منو تو قلبت فراموش نکن
Mano too ghalbet faramoosh nakon
Deep down, your heart didn't forget me

تو که می دونی واست می میرم
To ke midooni vasat mimiram
You who know that I'd die for you

اگر تو می خوای از اینجا میرم
Age to mikhay az inja miram
If you want I will leave this place

یاد اون روز ها که با تو بودم
Yade oon rooz ha ke ba to boodam
The memories of these days spent with you

خاطره بسته توی وجودم
Khatere baste tooye vajoodam
All these memories made me exist innerly
(I don't know which function "khatere baste" has, which makes the sentence hard for me to translate)

بگو جای من کیه تو قلبت
Begoo jaye man kiye too ghalbet
Tell me I'm the one for whom you have a place in your heart (I'm sooooo not sure about this line )

عطر کی می مونه ، روی پیرهنت
Atr ki mimoone, rooye pir hanet
The one whom fragrance remains on your shirt

عشق من بی تو می مونم
Eshghe man bi to mimoonam
My love, I'm staying without you

دوستم نداری ، این رو می دونم
Doostam nadari, in ro midoonam
You don't love me, I know that

از وقتی از اینجا رفتی
Az vaghti az inja rafti
Since you left (from here)

پیشم که نیستی دیگه دیوونم
Pisham ke nisti dige divoonam
(Since) you're no longer with me I've become more crazy (does "dige" go with "nisti" or with "divoonam"?)

میرم که شاید شب ها تو خوابم
Miram ke shayad (?) shab ha too khabam
I'm going to leave maybe (?) all nights in my dreams

تو رو ببینم , پیشت بشینم , دست های تو رو
To ro bebinam, pishet beshinam, dastet haye to ro
To see you, to sit by your side, I want to hold your hands (once) again

بازم بگیرم گرمی دستت ، نگاه نازت یادم نمیره
Bazam begiram, garmiye dastet, negahe nazet, yadam nemire
Your warm hand, your cute glance, my memories won't leave (me)

می دونم که تو پیشم نباشی دلم می میره
Midoonam ke to pisham nabashi delam mimire
I know that (if) you're not by my side, my heart will die

Oh my God! Naser's song and another "Oh my God" cause you amazed me again by translating a whole song!
I don't know what to say cause you're doing a great job so the only thing I can say is "1000 Afarin dooste golam" and keep up your great job
So now let's see what you've done exactly

Bazam mano

Bazam manam! or bazam man oumadam!

Kheyli khoshhalam misham age tarjome ino bebini va tas'hihesh koni

وقت رفنته حرف هام رو گوش کن
Vaghte raftane harf ham ro goosh kon
It's the time of leaving, listen to my words

منو تو قلبت فراموش نکن
Mano too ghalbet faramoosh nakon
Don't forget me in your heart

تو که می دونی واست می میرم
To ke midooni vasat mimiram
You who know that I'd die for you

اگر تو می خوای از اینجا میرم
Age to mikhay az inja miram
If you want I will leave this place

یاد اون روز ها که با تو بودم
Yade oon rooz ha ke ba to boodam
The memory of those days spent with you(=which I was with you)

خاطره بسته توی وجودم
Khatere baste tooye vajoodam
has become a very deep memory in my soul

"khatere bastan=To become a memory!"

بگو جای من کیه تو قلبت
Begoo jaye man kiye too ghalbet
Tell me who is in your heart instead of me?

عطر کی می مونه ، روی پیرهنت
Atr ki mimoone, rooye pir hanet
Whose fragrance remains on your shirt??

عشق من بی تو می مونم
Eshghe man bi to mimoonam
My love, I'm staying without you

دوستم نداری ، این رو می دونم
Doostam nadari, in ro midoonam
You don't love me, I know that

از وقتی از اینجا رفتی
Az vaghti az inja rafti
Since you left (from here)

پیشم که نیستی دیگه دیوونم
Pisham ke nisti dige divoonam
(Since) you're no longer with me I've become more crazy (does "dige" go with "nisti" or with "divoonam"?)
Oh actually I don't know how to explain "dige"..cause it can go with both "nisti" or divoonam!
if it goes with"nisti" it means "you're no longer with me" as you said!
if it goes with divoonam" it means since you're not with me I'm crazy then!

میرم که شاید شب ها تو خوابم
Miram ke shayad (?) shab ha too khabam
I'm going to leave so maybe at nights in my dreams

تو رو ببینم , پیشت بشینم , دست های تو رو
To ro bebinam, pishet beshinam, dastet haye to ro
I see you , sit by your side, hold your hands (once) again

بازم بگیرم گرمی دستت ، نگاه نازت یادم نمیره
Bazam begiram, garmiye dastet, negahe nazet, yadam nemire
I don't forget the warmth of your hand and your cute glance,

می دونم که تو پیشم نباشی دلم می میره
Midoonam ke to pisham nabashi delam mimire
I know that (if) you're not by my side, my heart will die

"Bazam migam karet ali bood azizam, kheyli kheyli ali... har cheghadr ham begam kam goftam!omidvaram rooz be rooz ham Farsit behtar she

yes it was amazing keep going

Binahayat mamnoon ke tas'hihesh kardi, Pinky jan, zahmat keshidi! 1000 Afarin?? Olalaaaaa mille merci mon amie !

Now I understand the points that were hard for me to translate, I understand that "kon" and "nakon" were imperative forms and understand better the order of some words and group of words in the sentence. And I like very much too your explanation of the both sentences with "dige", you're fantastic!! Bazam merci ke mozoo ro roshantar kardi!

Originally Posted by pinky_girl

"Bazam migam karet ali bood azizam, kheyli kheyli ali... har cheghadr ham begam kam goftam!omidvaram rooz be rooz ham Farsit behtar she

Kheyli mamnoon azize delam. Rooz be rooz Farsim behtar she, be lotfe to
...even if I have some days to catch up

Originally Posted by afsaneh

yes it was amazing keep going

Kheyli mamnoon dear Afsaneh, for your nice words and encouragement, I will..

Khahesh mikonam dooste azizam Aslan zahmati nabood va az inke toonestam komaket konam vaghean khoshalam va lezat bordam!
Yes "kon" means "do it" and "nakon" means "don't do it"
Awwwwwwwww enghadr khoob farsi harf mizani ke man bazi vaghta yadam mire ke faransavai hasti vaghean kheyli ba estedad hasti(=You're really so talented)

Rooz be rooz Farsim behtar mishe, be lotfe to

Hamin alan ham kheyli herfeyi hasti(=at the moment, you're so perofessional)