Waiting For The End

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    Johnb31 said:

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    This song was inspired by the song swing life away by Rise Against one of my favorite songs from one of my favorite bands.

    "Verse"
    ​Oh there's something about all this pain
    And there's something that I can't explain
    As I'm flipping through pages
    Of books from the past
    I wonder will this world Last
    I wonder Will this world last
    "Chorus"
    Oh I'm waiting here for the end
    And I'm waiting for the cataclysm to begin
    I sit here alone tonight
    Looking over a night less sky
    And I wonder will I ever find
    A reason to live this life
    "Verse"
    Yeah I sit here alone by the river
    Trying to see a little more clearer
    Wondering how I got this far
    As I stare at the darkening stars
    I feel my aging scars
    As I begin to freeze in time
    "Chorus"
    Oh I'm waiting here for the end
    And I'm waiting for the cataclysm to begin
    I sit here alone tonight
    Looking over a night less sky
    And I wonder will I ever find
    A reason to live this life
    A reason to live this life
    "Bridge"
    Yeah I am apart of this sin
    As I wait here for the end
    The days of perfection
    Lie over the horizon
    And I find a reason to live
    Life the most that I should


    "Chorus"
    Oh I'm waiting here for the end
    And I'm waiting for the cataclysm to begin
    But tonight I'll be running
    Faster than before
    Sounding off every alarm
    Screaming out for others to be warned
    As I wait here for........the end
    There is not enough space or time to truly let the song unwind
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    I love nice upbeat songs like this!Nice job!!
     
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    amaryn said:

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    "Waiting for the end": one wouldnot expect a "nightless sky" or "days of perfection over the horizon" to be associated with that.
    herefore fascinating and worthwhile to be read many a time. Thanks,John, as always!
     
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    Thatsmeonthetrain said:

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    Yes yes yes
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Thatsmeonthetrain View Post
    Yes yes yes
    Are you Daniel Bryan?
     
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    Johnb31 said:

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    This is Waiting For The End

    There is not enough space or time to truly let the song unwind
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    First off........it's pretty brave of you to sing without any echo or reverb!That being said.......I'm such a fan I don't know what to say!I'm very impressed!You have a style that I'm not familiar with,but it rocks nonetheless!I hope you rewrite the lyrics so I can follow you're vocals more closely.Great start,only 149 to go!
     
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    I have somewhere around 15 of my songs with music I just never got around to recording. Some of these lyrics I will never sing just because it's not me anymore. Thank you so much! I don't believe in that electronic make your voice sound better crap I've done it before and I listened and said this is not me that's not my voice anymore that is just a computers rendition of who I am. Those mics don't capture emotion and passion only noise. I will be posting more of my songs when I get them recorded next up is "Make The Most of It".
    There is not enough space or time to truly let the song unwind
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Everybody uses a little reverb;Elvis,Robert Plant,Rod Steward,Sting,Dylan,John Lennon and Paul McCartney and the list goes on.I'm not saying to distort your vocal;only enhance it.I have spoken.
     
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    Johnb31 said:

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    Haha I get what your saying.
    There is not enough space or time to truly let the song unwind
     
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    Johnb31 said:

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    I'm gonna do fancy recordings with fancy equipment sometime this month for this song I will add a little reverb for ya Doug haha
    There is not enough space or time to truly let the song unwind
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Johnb31 View Post
    I'm gonna do fancy recordings with fancy equipment sometime this month for this song I will add a little reverb for ya Doug haha
    As you know........I only want the best for you.If and when you do, add a little, I'll give you my honest opinion on whether it helps or hinders your performance.I hope,if it does help,you'll go with it.After all,you want to succeed as an artist,not get hung up on "nonsense"!!