You

You

Resemble me.
I heard it distant
that voice of many
I had no pity then, but I
wonder now.
What you meant, not just
for yourself. But the
reason, did it have any a reason?
Enough to make yourself question
if a godless was in front of thee?
Maybe it was you?
Maybe I was?
Or just a resemblance, of
you?

Did it startle you
Did I meet you with empty
gaze
Just to provoke what
answers thought of faith
within?
Am I xeno-
when we face?

Standing in that room, a moment
was not just me and you, but every other.
Remember how it started?
You did not ask it first, you
did not confront with.
One which is likely the same
question, but you and I
just wont see it
the same...

But I do, I see a god and a
man just like the many, thousands before.
I see, devotion to a cause of greater good
I see complete sympathy for the world you "just" made
I see rationality just like any other
I see a wreath and a suit of him almighty
I see, myself fumbling with these words
reaching out.
But what I never really saw, was
You



em gnilbmeser

Nice!! It reads more like a poem, but a darn good one. Profound words in here and good insight. Very nice Eccer, very nice

Thanks alot. Yeah, this reads more like a poem. But I was thinking maybe.....it could fit a song as well.

It asks for a few more readings, Eccer, as is usual with your poetry, but my first impression is positive.
You seem- once more- to handle a looking glass handsomely and effectively!
Thanks, my friend.

As regards poem or song: I tend to see it more as a poem, but this is only after the first reading. We'll see!