madness and me

Thread: madness and me

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  1. Tomatomic said:

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    I'm sick of this
    Sick of the feeling
    Sick of the way it makes me forget
    I'm losing myself
    losing my memories
    What is this curse??
    This total blank
    May I be frank,
    It's turning me against the world!
    But I digress.
    It's superfluous;
    Why can't you diagnose...

    Between my madness and me
    There's no human being
    A shadow who knows just insanity
    I've got the desire to kill
    An insatiable thrill
    To see the end in all it's majesty!!
    Terrible majesty!
    Between my madness and me!!!!

    Crave release
    Release from hate
    I switch back and forth, schizophrenic madman
    One mind loves
    While the other plots hell
    Help a poor soul please!!
    I feel so soiled
    My mind in turmoil
    I can't wash the blood away!!!

    Between my madness and me
    There's no human being
    A victim who struggles to once again be clean
    The voices scream within
    Let it come flooding in
    Use the hate to live your dream!!
    Between my madness and me!

    It's still here, coming out again I'm trying to tear it down!
    You just can't see and you don't care, I'm just another face that you don't know and never expected to see again!!
    It's all a game to you, but it's my life.she hit me he beat me, I just repressed what hurt to much
    I can't be to blame, what ****.quit your pshycobabble i need help!!!
    No No No, I don't need it not again. keep it away. AWAY I SAY. No Nooo....!

    Between my madness and me
    There's just a human being
    Whats lost its grip on reality
    Release me not
    Keep me away.
    My mind is lost
    Save yourself
    From my madness and me..
    Last edited by Tomatomic; 03-07-2014 at 04:08 AM.
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    I'm starting to "understand" your posts better after reading them all these months.I'm starting to yell,scream,wail your lyrics and I'm starting to dig the heck of of them.Good Job,Atomic One!
     
  3. Tomatomic said:

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    Rock on forever dude!!!!!!!!!
     
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    Frankie Jasmine said:

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    Does it help in any way
    If I say
    Your poem
    Needs no explanation
    to me and
    Mine?
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Gee,why did your thread turn I to a trash can?
     
  6. Peter Both said:

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    Fascinating stuff. Disturbing and addictive. I keep on reading it.