Everybody hate ME

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CNtQBLWSgK8

I'm not a bad back-ally kid circle-jerkin' gang-bang ****
for malicious respect from cheap tricks/
I don't promote violence cause the discretion is yours/
Don't give me advice the only judge is God, my lord
that gave me a six on my
left palm to qualm these deeper bombs that I can drop/
I wouldn't be surprised if you flip-flopped/
when your mama beat your| hypocritical *** with an iron rod, sad sod/
F, E, E, R means truth/
go look it up/
while Facebook girls are lookin down with/
14 likes on every status are makin these dogs rabid
and friendly guys are a habit/
You're not smokin' though/
Your self-esteem is transparent
cause when you feel sad your ***** is cum-clad/
takin a drag, on hormones/
they'd **** you crazy and finish in ten seconds,
the next you're alone/
I give you credit though/
cause you weren't any easy lock/
but your waters are still shallow
your heart is still a hollow blot/
hate me for who I am cause
I don't hide behind a guise tryna blend in camouflage
dodgin' bullets from a mirage/
No skeletons in my closet because I have no closet
and I don't douse out my own flames/
y'all makin the excuse for maturity
but all I see are tumors in your brains
from pent up rage/
you think holdin a gun to my face is like
controlling an animal out of a cage/
but I have few reasons to live
and I was born out-of-place/
so if you kill me you can be happy
cause the fakes you call your friends will do the same/
you live just to live, most of you don't just survive/
because, livin on the streets is a leap from a high dive/
with pavement underneath your scared eyes/
Hate me errbody
Hate me errbody

Not a terrible piece man, but it's not great either. Definitely need to work on the amount of wordplay, and more metaphors, try to think of crazy ****, like for ex. from Rhyme Asylum: "If I did start to smoke weed, I'd take two tokes hold my breath for a whole week and O.D" that is the **** that makes people go OHHH ya know? Also, the flow bro, the flow. You want it to be so well flowing that it sounds amazing with the beat, hop in the cypher I posted up and the infidelity post the other guy put up and that **** should help you out some. But keep it going man, I like the idea, and I did like some of the lines, try to work on syllables too. Like: "You live just to live, most of you do not simply survive (14), because, livin on the streets is a leap from a high-dive (14), with nothing but truth and pavement underneath your scared eyes (14).

thanks man but I od'd on tamadol and promethazine last night feels like someone stuck a needle through my brain

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