Swimming Pools [remix] 'Drank' ft. Lame Feer

Song link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TdDli...ature=youtu.be

Prelude:
Vodka/
Drank./
Jack up/
Drank./
Whiskey/
Drank./
Gin town/
Drank./
Upper cut/
Drank./
Malibu/
Drank./
Black out/
Drank./
Faded/
Drank./

Verse 1:
Now, I can't even make a song without gettin drunk/
or bustin my lungs/
from draggin my past across a blunt/
my eyelids are two tons/
when my conscience speaks/
"Mane you ain't even havin fun"/
rememberin I got a gun, but I laugh and pull a slant/
like my dad, a schizoaffective psychopath/
I'm just like him, pulling that glass out fast/
trapped and mottled in a bottle/
swoon and fondle my problems/
slipped and dropped em when I heard
a voice say stop it/
then I lost it when she said/

Chorus:
Boy, why are you pullin out all of those shots?/
I, heard what you did and I've seen what you got/
You gotta mind full of liquor and you dive in it/
Soul full of liquor and you dive in it/
Everytime that your heart goes and skips another beat/
I'll take ooverr your boodyy/
patch the wound that doesn't bleed/
Pills full of liquor and you dive in em'
Mistakes full of liquor and you dive in em'/

2.
Vodka/
Drank./
Jack up/
Drank./
Whiskey/
Drank./
Gin town/
Drank./
Upper cut/
Drank./
Malibu/
Drank./
Black out/
Drank./
Faded/
Drank./

Verse 2:
This is the other side people ever rarely see/
you're straining your own hope, Rocky
on a slope that's way too steep/
Why not admit defeat/
I'm, Ambidime, your disguise; I
gave you armor to pierce through lies/
Do not ever defy/
Who do I blame this time, then/
Shame in my lanes washin it all away with
some drank and a grin/
20's in the front
40's in the back of a benz/
Shoulders are goin slack again/
Only this makes any sense/
Only what she said makes sense, yuh/

Chorus 2:
Boy, why are you pullin out all of those shots?/
I, heard what you did and I've seen what you got/
You gotta mind full of liquor and you dive in it/
Soul full of liquor and you dive in it/
Everytime that your heart goes and skips another beat/
I'll take over your body/
patch the wound that doesn't bleed/
Pills full of liquor and you dive in em'
Guilt full of liquor and you dive in it/

3:
Vodka/
Drank./
Jack up/
Drank./
Whiskey/
Drank./
Gin town/
Drank./
Upper cut/
Drank./
Malibu/
Drank./
Black out/
Drank./
Faded/
Drank./

END

Creative criticism is welcomed. Putting the song up tonight.