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Sounds like a rather slow, but heavy rocksong. (maybe like Soundgarden's Black Hole Sun?)

Zak,this is so romantic in a mysterious way!I love it.This has to be my favorite piece you've written.it really hits me in a way that's....just right!Bravo!!!

Hey Doug, I'm so glad you like it! Because I spend little time here, if you need me to return the favour, I'm willing to comment on any song of yours. Now that I've left school, I have enough time to exploit my moments of inspiration. Lol These days the night sky is very bright, you can clearly see fluffy white clouds... a good source of inspiration to me.

Originally Posted by Zakynthos

Hey Doug, I'm so glad you like it! Because I spend little time here, if you need me to return the favour, I'm willing to comment on any song of yours. Now that I've left school, I have enough time to exploit my moments of inspiration. Lol These days the night sky is very bright, you can clearly see fluffy white clouds... a good source of inspiration to me.

Thanks Zak.You've always held a special place in my heart due to your comments on Raven Beauty (of the night).Take a look at French Fry Cool,it's something I recently wrote,and not an "oldie" that I just posted,for fun.If you don't quite "get it" I've tried to explain it in the comments.It's one of those "read between the lines" type songs.See what you think.Thanks.

ZAK!! It's you! I'm just back from the Pelopponesos and now you're here!
Thanks for taking time to blow your inspiration in a poem here.
Did you also write it in Greek?
Please, DO keep writing here at times, will you?
Anytime will do!
Thanks for this lovepoem, though it involves loneliness ;
It unfortunately walks hand in hand with the better side of love.
Another time?