Echo of the Sun

My past
At last
Ain't my future anymore
Where I
Have been
Is not my closest shore

No more wondering
Where I came from
Chasing shadows of the thunder
Or echoes of the sun

I'm just
Here to
Find my own way
Not care
About
What isn't here today

I'm not living for
What kept me on the run
No shadows of the thunder
Or echoes of the sun

You know where to find me
I have just now begun
A little late but all the same
Its the echo of the sun

No more wondering
Where I came from
Chasing shadows of the thunder
Or echoes of the sun
I'm not living for
What kept me on the run
No shadows of the thunder
Or echoes of the sun

My old friend 2numbers!I'm glad when you decided to make a come back,you did it with a winner!I like this better than any of the songs I can remember you writing!This,to me,is on the right track!Stay on it!The fourth stanza is killer!Wow,you've really picked up your game!!!

2numbers, this is good!!!! Like it!

To me it has a late sixties feel. In my head I hear Vox-organs, mellotrons, sitars. Great song!

Good, 2numbers, you made your point on an Optimistic Tone like a carelessly whistling guy on a sunny afternoon.
I felt good reading this, thanks to you!
Nice to meet you here!

It is really, really good.

Originally Posted by BackInBlack

It is really, really good.

I love a good critique!