Untitled - First Draft

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  1. RevolvingElk said: 09-29-2013 10:35 AM

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    Doug Denslowe said: 10-01-2013 06:27 PM

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    I love the first verse,and the poem as a whole.If you brought the other verses up to the level of the first,you'd have a classic!