Everything Is Obvious

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  1. Peter Both said:

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    -verse 1
    Everything is obvious
    It’s so plain to see
    There’s no question in my mind
    I should live more dangerously

    Everything is crystal clear
    No doubts for me
    It’s been staring me in the face
    I could be so carefree

    Break these chains that are holding me
    I don’t need no guru to set me free
    Don’t need no drugs to change the chemistry
    And that’s obvious to me

    -verse 2
    Nothing is impossible
    Or unattainable
    Now I know it all for sure
    Nothing is inevitable

    Taking chances, fancy free
    I will walk this tightrope so fearlessly
    Now that I’ve learned to depend on me
    I will depend on me

    -bridge
    And I will learn to overcome resistance
    No matter what it takes
    I’ll go the distance

    I’ll make sure my heart won’t be broken
    ‘Cause I will speak my mind
    No word unspoken

    -outtro (vocals improvising)
    That’s obvious
    So obvious
    Everything is obvious
     
  2. Tokie said:

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    Should be titled "ME" . And should i be imagining that the person singing is miley cyrus?
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    This has "cool" written all over it.......I'll be back for many more visits.
     
  4. MrGore said:

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    Pretty uplifting. I dig it bro.
     
  5. Peter Both said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Tokie View Post
    Should be titled "ME" . And should i be imagining that the person singing is miley cyrus?
    It is a sort of 'coming-of-age' song so a young woman singing it would be a good idea. Miley? Why not. If Pharell is willing to do the production (perhaps rename it "No More Disney") we will be raking in the Grammy's next year. Then Miley and I will do a little dance together on stage!
    Last edited by Peter Both; 10-07-2013 at 06:58 AM.
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Peter Both View Post
    It is a sort of 'coming-of-age' song so a young woman singing it would be a good idea. Miley? Why not. If Pharell is willing to do the production (perhaps rename it "No More Disney") we will be raking in the Grammy's next year. Then Miley and I will do a little dance together on stage!
    Just keep your tongues in your mouths!
     
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    Johnb31 said:

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    This set of lines I think are the best
    "Break these chains that are holding me
    I don’t need no guru to set me free
    Don’t need no drugs to change the chemistry
    And that’s obvious to me"
    They remind me of the song Mess Of Me by Switchfoot it basically says how its not the drugs that are the problem its yourself and in order to change you have to do it yourself. So the connection is being bound by something and learning to set yourself free. In fact I think those lines would make an amazing chorus and you could use the last line as the name "Obvious to Me" just a suggestion. Really great song I love this!
    There is not enough space or time to truly let the song unwind
     
  8. GVLaker2 said:

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    Good lyrics, looks like you're working through some stuff?
     
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    amaryn said:

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    What's obvious to me is this: here I feel a wnderful swinging rhythm, sustaining an obviously optimistic content!
    Wonderful, Peter, absolutely a good song to be performed by the right kind of musicians.
    That's obvious to me.
    It may need a few moments of consideration as regards the way words are put down, just to strengthen the rhythm, but no change of content.
    I enjoyed every minute of it!
     
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    Kerri Faye Yates said:

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    Holy goodness this is awesome! And totally relatable
    ~Kerri Faye