Trapped Inside

I remember the car flying through the air
I remember filling my underwear
I saw stars before my eyes
I fell so hard I thought I died
"Chorus"
I've got a feeling deep inside
I'm not sure if I'm alive
Did I just die
Or am I stuck inside
With the walls falling down
I'm trapped inside my mind


I hear the people outside
They wonder if I'm alive
Poking at my finger tips
Trying to make me slip
But all I could do
Was sit there stuck like glue
Oh I am stuck in my mind
Chorus"
I've got a feeling deep inside
I'm not sure if I'm alive
Did I just die
Or am I stuck inside
With the walls falling down
I'm trapped inside my mind


I hear the doctor talking to my mom
I hear my mom crying on and on
At that moment I woke up
And everyone cheered up
Chorus"
I've got a feeling deep inside
I now know that I'm alive
I didn't just die
And now I'm no longer
Stuck in my mind

This is an unusual departure for you........absolutely love this song!Give us more........just wait a day or two!

Yeah it was written on the same night as a bunch of other songs the last couple I posted were all written within 2 hours from 1 to 3 in the morning hahaha. Something different is bound to come by the end.

I love the storyline of this song, again told with verve and energy. It made me feel like I was 'trapped' too.

The first and the third verses have four lines, the second has seven. Does it take on another direction here music-wise?

It could go either way I haven't written music for it yet but the 3 extra lines can be removed if need be. or the flow of music could change maybe a chord progression repeated twice something like that. The middle verse is the actual time being trapped inside the first verse is going into it and the last is coming out of it so I felt that the middle verse needed more attention.

I'm really hooked on the chorus!