die eveyday

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  1. Tomatomic said:

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    staring down the barrel of an AK
    the jaws of death shut around me
    nowhere to run and nowhere to hide
    always on the lookout playing ****ing I spy

    there's no justice for me
    if i die and die again
    it's a scam and a lie
    that's become real life

    I die everyday
    and can't walk away
    addicted to the rage
    that the way i live and what i love
    the way i live and what i love
    I die everyday
    impossible you say
    there's no price to pay
    when you live in a game
    so you die everyday.

    whether pump action or long range death
    stuck in a wall or blinded by a flash
    only takes one shot to raise your score
    i'm always out gunned by glitching *****s

    it's unfair but so true
    i die and die again
    so stupid but so cool
    hate being ****ing screwed

    I die everyday
    and can't walk away
    addicted to the rage
    that the way i live and what i love
    the way i live and what i love
    I die everyday
    impossible you say
    there's no price to pay
    when you live in a game
    so you die everyday.

    DIE-EVERY-DAY!!!!
    HATE-THEGODAMN-THING!!!!
    IT-DRIVESMETO-SCREAM!!!!!
    ****-I NEED TO GET A LIFE........!

    I die everyday
    and can't walk away
    addicted to the rage
    that the way i live and what i love
    the way i live and what i love
    I die everyday
    impossible you say
    there's no price to pay
    when you live in a game
    so you die everyday.
     
  2. Doug Denslowe's Avatar

    Doug Denslowe said:

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    This may be the best,in my opinion,song lyric I've read from you.The opening verse got me thinking I was in for something good.The refrain is great.I hope you can look back at this,to see how good you write.I'm very impressed!Update Oct.17.Atomic One,I'm very surprised this didn't get more replies!But you never know what the folks at ATL will respond to!I like even negative replies over No replies!I hope this gets the attention it deserves!
    Last edited by Doug Denslowe; 10-17-2013 at 02:51 PM. Reason: UPDATE
     
  3. Tomatomic said:

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    cheers for the support doug!!!!! this is the way the cookie crumbles though!
     
  4. Peter Both said:

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    I'm a fan of this song. In my head I hear music that sounds like Metallica's "Enter Sandman": a raw and muscular sound that is melodic and moody as well. After "-I NEED TO GET A LIFE........!" comes a frenzied guitar solo (with sounds of explosions and gunfire)
     
  5. Tomatomic said:

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    cheers pete!!!!!!!!!