Poem: Excessive Transfer

A sweet sonata heard by she
Then through bizarre technology
Transferred to the mind of he
Into his virginal body

Every note in sharp staccato
Every hum in sweet vibrato
Tech of deadly sweet desire
Setting every nerve on fire

Connected to a fantasy
Never dream of e'er by he
Breathing heavy, panting quick
Glowing, sweating, shiny slick

New lust never felt before
Sweet sonata, deadly score
Whimpering, moaning, crying out
Dying not, but passing out.

Short and sweet!Very cool!

I'm really glad you liked it. I still can't believe I dared to write it. It was inspired by the Dream Thieves episode of Max Headroom and the Excessive Machine scene from Barbarella. (it was Bryce who was seduced in this case, though the seduction was completely metaphysical).

Originally Posted by ElegantButler

I'm really glad you liked it. I still can't believe I dared to write it. It was inspired by the Dream Thieves episode of Max Headroom and the Excessive Machine scene from Barbarella. (it was Bryce who was seduced in this case, though the seduction was completely metaphysical).

Where would we be without the influence of Max Headroom!I wish they'd cast a new actor to portray him,it's long overdo!

Originally Posted by Doug Denslowe

Where would we be without the influence of Max Headroom!I wish they'd cast a new actor to portray him,it's long overdo!

Without Max to tell us the updated meaning of cool, we'd have to continue relying on the Fonz.

Originally Posted by ElegantButler

Without Max to tell us the updated meaning of cool, we'd have to continue relying on the Fonz.

I think it's time to recast the Fonz as well!Also Max has always been much cooler than the Fonz.

The only really successful recasting of the Fonz was Snoopy as Joe Cool. And you're right about Max. Max could survive more than ten minutes with Bryce Lynch without having a major meltdown.