Rivers Flow Deep

Verse 1 -
If the world is looking happy...
and my cloudy eyes won't cry.
It's hard to see what I see,
'Cause you emerge and I subside.
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The ice is cold upon your touch.
Fire burns like it's had enough.
We are the magnets in a storm.
You can fly but my wings have torn.

Chorus -
I have emotion like the ocean.
And the rivers flow deep.
But the greed holds no devotion,
You're the rock that can't bleed.
I have emotion like the ocean,
And the rivers flow deep.
Like i'm pulled into a motion.
Underneath I can't breathe.

Verse 2
If the sadness has a linger,
Like the shadows of your steps.
I am the lonley singer.
That you should have never met.
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If the world is looking happy...
and my cloudy eyes won't cry.
It's hard to see what I see,
'Cause you emerge and I subside.

Bridge-
Every day, the night will fall.
Like I'm a wolf with a lonely call.
Just too close, too far away.
Like it's right there in front of me.


Chorus -
[I have emotion like the ocean.
And the rivers flow deep.
But the greed holds no devotion,
You're the rock that can't bleed.
I have emotion like the ocean,
And the rivers flow deep.
Like i'm pulled into a motion.
Underneath I can't breathe.] x2
'Cause the rivers flow deep.
The rivers flow deep.

Some great images here because of the nice job you did with the lyrics. I enjoyed reading it, thanks.

Very Good! Nice to see you back and still on your game, old friend!

like this , not sure about the last line in the bridge , it pulled me till that line , good stuff !!! rock on !!!

This is really great!

I especially dig the chorus.

The chorus is outstanding. Best you've written... that I've read so far.

The chorus is outstanding.

The song rocks with a gentle touch. Like a Stevie Nicks-song (Rhiannon, Dreams)