Glossy Eyes

Thread: Glossy Eyes

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  1. StripedSweater's Avatar

    StripedSweater said:

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    Life doesn't always work out
    Like you planned it
    They say, don't give up, just keep on moving
    But I try, and I try, I just can't understand it

    All this crying for no good reason
    You make plans, but God laughs
    Why do you even bother to ask that?

    Oh no, hey your glossy eyes
    My bad, honey my bad
    You think, there's no one on your side
    Lie back, it's not like that

    Life doesn't always work out
    Like you planned it
    They say, make dream, and go get it
    But I tried, and I can't, understand it

    All of this begging for no good reason
    Make a wish, but fall hard
    Why do I even think it'll work out

    Once upon a time, you win
    Run this town
    It doesn't even matter now
    But now, the sun sets
    It's time to go
    Home

    Oh no, hey your glossy eyes
    My bad, honey my bad
    You think, there's no one on your side
    Lie back, it's not like that
    Last edited by StripedSweater; 11-14-2013 at 03:04 AM.
     
  2. Doug Denslowe's Avatar

    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Love it!I think "bother" in the 7th line is what you meant.I read it that way before I noticed you spelled it "both"!!I love the refrain,and it rocks off the page!
    Last edited by Doug Denslowe; 11-14-2013 at 11:02 AM. Reason: Changed 6th to 7th........
     
  3. Peter Both said:

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    I love this song, especially the chorus. I feel that big drums and the big guitars come crashing in like thunder when the chorus starts.
     
  4. LooknGlass said:

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    Good stuff, well worded without the cliches. Nice job on this. Kudos
     
  5. amaryn's Avatar

    amaryn said:

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    "you think there's noone on your side,
    lie back, it's not like that"


    oh, Sweater , such soothing words , really consoling and a smasher line!
    Thanks, darling <3
    I am humming it already!