Glossy Eyes
Thread: Glossy Eyes
StripedSweater said:
11-14-2013 12:47 AM
Glossy Eyes
Life doesn't always work out
Like you planned it
They say, don't give up, just keep on moving
But I try, and I try, I just can't understand it
All this crying for no good reason
You make plans, but God laughs
Why do you even bother to ask that?
Oh no, hey your glossy eyes
My bad, honey my bad
You think, there's no one on your side
Lie back, it's not like that
Life doesn't always work out
Like you planned it
They say, make dream, and go get it
But I tried, and I can't, understand it
All of this begging for no good reason
Make a wish, but fall hard
Why do I even think it'll work out
Once upon a time, you win
Run this town
It doesn't even matter now
But now, the sun sets
It's time to go
Home
Oh no, hey your glossy eyes
My bad, honey my bad
You think, there's no one on your side
Lie back, it's not like that
Last edited by StripedSweater; 11-14-2013 at 03:04 AM .
Doug Denslowe said:
11-14-2013 12:59 AM
Love it!I think "bother" in the 7th line is what you meant.I read it that way before I noticed you spelled it "both"!!I love the refrain,and it rocks off the page!
Last edited by Doug Denslowe; 11-14-2013 at 11:02 AM .
Reason: Changed 6th to 7th........
Peter Both said:
11-15-2013 03:46 AM
I love this song, especially the chorus. I feel that big drums and the big guitars come crashing in like thunder when the chorus starts.
LooknGlass said:
11-19-2013 06:25 PM
Good stuff, well worded without the cliches. Nice job on this. Kudos
amaryn said:
11-21-2013 07:22 AM
"you think there's noone on your side,
lie back, it's not like that"
oh, Sweater , such soothing words , really consoling and a smasher line!
Thanks, darling <3
I am humming it already!