Nothingtown

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  1. RockinRustle said:

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    well I grew up in a ghost town
    along the lake Michigan shoreline
    I grew up in a ghost town
    that nearly drove me out of my mind
    I called it nothingtown cause there's never nothing going down
    I called it nothingtown as I burned that city to the ground
    my childhood home was in a ghost town
    my childhood home was here in nothingtown
    here in nothingtown

    alcoholics and religious nuts
    both loved me both hated my guts
    now I walk these dusty burned out streets
    screaming out my lungs "does anyone know me"
    now my boots they hit the ground here in this ghost town
    when my boots they hit the ground they made a high and lonesome sound
    my childhood home was in a ghost town
    my childhood home was here in nothingtown
    here in nothingtown

    on a windy day on an empty street
    the corner of Jefferson and 17th
    the local sheriff shot me down
    I fell to my knees then face first on the ground
    a pool of blood is where I drown
    my soul never left this ghost town
    I still haunt the streets
    here in nothingtown
    here in nothingtown
    here in nothingtown
     
  2. orsen said:

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    This deserves a reply so I'm giving it one, there is some good lines in here and I hope more people read it
     
  3. ElegantButler said:

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    I can hear a slow and somber guitar as the lyrics begin. I can hear the music swell as the tale is told, and then ebb as the singer's fate is revealed.
     
  4. LooknGlass said:

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    Some really great lines in here and it exudes somewhat of a dark brooding vibe. Yea, I like the feel to this, almost an Evanescence kind of music comes to mind.

    "when my boots they hit the ground they made a high and lonesome sound"...In this line, you might want to change "made" into "make" for grammar reasons. This is pretty good Rockin. Kudos!
     
  5. Peter Both said:

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    Great song, it's dark and bleak atmosphere makes me think of the album Nebraska by Bruce Springsteen.
     
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    It's makes me feel kind of depressed while reading it... good job! lol