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  1. Zakynthos said: 11-30-2013 02:29 PM

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  2. Peter Both said: 11-30-2013 04:16 PM

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    Lovely. I can imagine the music to sound quiet and subdued like the Cowboy Junkies' version of Sweet Jane.
     

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    Doug Denslowe said: 11-30-2013 07:43 PM

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    I love this,especially the refrain.This is a great song lyric,great poetry!This has to be one of,if not my favorite post by you.I know this is going to be hard to top,but keep trying anyway!
     

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    Johnb31 said: 12-06-2013 01:07 AM

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    I really like how you used rust as a metaphor here someone that is eroding away and being devoured by rust isn't a pretty picture. Nice job with this I love it.
    There is not enough space or time to truly let the song unwind