Ring, Ring ,Ring

Thread: Ring, Ring ,Ring

Tags: cheating, love
  1. Anzac said:

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    It’s been a terribly long day and I can’t sleep at night
    Worrying about somebody else holding you tight
    But I hope my thinking is foolish and misplaced
    You are still mine and this is just a silly test

    To check, I called you at home
    And the line goes ring, ring, ring
    I called you on your mobile phone
    And the line goes ring, ring, ring

    Tossing and turning alone in bed till the morning
    I called and texted you and still heard nothing
    Now as far I can see something aint right here
    You’re giving me reasons to justify my fears

    Did you go out looking for a new lover?
    Last night
    Did you go to sleep in the arms of another?
    Please don't lie

    Ooh I called you at home
    And the line goes ring, ring, ring
    I called you on your mobile phone
    And the line goes ring, ring, ring

    Give me your love
    Give me your love
    Oh give it to me

    Oohh I called you at home
    And the line goes ring, ring, ring
    I called you on your mobile phone
    And the line goes ring, ring, ring, ring

    Don't fool around
    Answer your phone
    Don't fool around
    Answer your phone

    Can you hear? I'm calling you at home
    And the line goes ring, ring, ring
    I'm calling you on your mobile phone
    And the line goes ring, ring, ring, ring
    Oh no (ring,ring) Oh no no (ring,ring,ring....)
    Last edited by Anzac; 12-09-2013 at 12:01 PM.
     
  2. orsen said:

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    I liked this, I think Abba had a song called "Ring, Ring" back in the 70's, check it out. I liked how you put text and mobile communication in there, we all have to start doing this with our lyrics.
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Very cool.When I think "retro" while reading a song that also counts big time!
     
  4. Anzac said:

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    It does have that retro ABBA feeling to it now that I think about it. Thank you for the feedback.