Danger Zone Love

Danger Zone Love

verse 1
In her little cardboard house
She hears the welders welding all night long
Shivering under a blanket
She cannot sleep.

verse 2
In his home of brick and steel
He works the whole day long
Comfortable and cozy
He never weeps.

chorus
As he crossed the danger zone
The peril of the world came down on him.
As she crossed the danger zone
A destiny of love came down on them.

verse 3
Waking in her cardboard house
He hears the welders welding all night long
Cuddled together under the blanket
They both make love til day.

verse 4
Love hits in her cardboard house
He wishes very much that he could stay
knowing that the people where he lived
Would never accept in the same way

chorus
As he crossed the danger zone
The peril of the world came down on him.
As she crossed the danger zone
A destiny of love came down on them.

verse 5
Marriage torn by those in power
Two lovers weeping in the night
Knowing that they're very desperate
To be with each other one again

verse 6
Trying to return to her each day
Held in comfort he can no longer stand
Every day he wishes that
The others would recognize his pain

chorus
As he crossed the danger zone
The peril of the world came down on him.
As she crossed the danger zone
A destiny of love came down on them.

So it's like a Romeo and Juliette type situation. Nice

Very unique way of putting the situation in writing and you convey the feeling well.

I pass them every time I go the The Store.(See The Store on Poetry site to see what I mean!Page 2)

a very unique take on this , good stuff !! no real crits other then a melody didn't come to mind , but been up way to long . rock on !!