so beautifully sad

hey all , this came on the bus , amidst all the noise and other music , got a little 1+1 thing to it but my voice is shot so will try to get another here soon to it , any and all crit's welcome . rock on

how do you mend a broken heart
when every beat leaves a scar
cant place blame on who you are
some are meant to be shooting stars
(half pause ) to be loved till the fires gone

she builds walls that touch the sky
and just laughs when you ask her why
so beautifully sad inside

she talks like you're best friends
tells you all the places she been
but never really let's you in


how do you mend a broken heart
when every beat leaves a scar
cant place blame on who you are
some are meant to be shooting stars
how do you mend a broken heart
when every beat leaves a scar
cant place blame on who you are
some are meant to be shooting stars
(half pause ) to be loved till the fires gone

you want to hold her and love her so
but you can't and this you know
she's behind her walls all alone

you can see her laugh as she cries
and it's this that makes you try
praying that maybe just this time

how do you mend a broken heart
when every beat leaves a scar
cant place blame on who you are
some are meant to be shooting stars
how do you mend a broken heart
when every beat leaves a scar
cant place blame on who you are
some are meant to be shooting stars
(half pause ) to be loved till the fires gone

she builds walls that touch the sky
and just laughs when you ask her why
so beautifully sad inside
(full pause ) so beautifully sad inside

how do you mend a broken heart
when every beat leaves a scar
cant place blame on who you are
some are meant to be shooting stars
(half pause ) to be loved till the fires gone

Good write. It's funny how beauty and sadness are often linked in poetry and song. I'd get The Bee Gees out of the opening line.

This rocks right off the page.It's easy to imagine how this is to be played;the rhythm is so apparent.Great song lyrics,absolutely great!

Originally Posted by Doug Denslowe

This rocks right off the page.It's easy to imagine how this is to be played;the rhythm is so apparent.Great song lyrics,absolutely great!

thanks for the read.!! this is a simple song basically ,with a little diddy where well my guitar has a crying moment lol but other then that pretty simple
again thanks for the read and kind words ! rock on !!!

Every piece I read of yours, I become more impressed!

Very well written song...wish I one how to mend a broken heart!!. Really really dig the...so beautifully dad inside line. I can def relate to this song..keep writing brother.

Jeff