Everything

Strange,
How you can make frustrations disappear,
A simple smile in my direction,
I forget to cry,

And now,
Whenever you stare deep into my eyes,
My heart begins to soar, I swear I've
Never felt so high,

Please, I don't think I could take,
A day without your presence,
Whichever road I take,
Please, don't ever leave me here,
All alone with my mind,
It's suddenly clear,
You're everything,

See,
How I change when you are close to me,
And how we always laugh together,
Talk away the night,

Please, I don't think I could take,
A day without your presence,
Whichever road I take,
Please, don't ever leave me here,
All alone with my mind,
It's suddenly clear,
You're everything,

Don't ever think for a moment,
You'll ever let me down,
All your flaws are perfect to me,
Head's in the clouds but you keep me here on the ground!

Please, I don't think I could take,
A day without your presence,
Whichever road I take,
Please, don't ever leave me here,
All alone with my mind,
It's suddenly clear,
You're everything,

I've got nothing to fear,
While you're everything,

Please, please,
You're everything


(This is awful. I haven't written lyrics in... ages. Feel free to slate and destroy)

It's not awful at all it's actually pretty good maybe a little wordy but I don't know your rhythm and I like wordy songs anyway so I'm not one to question it. I really like the chorus it's the heart of the song like it should, brings everything together as one nice job.

Yeah. Some of the lines don't really fit the pattern I ended up using. It was kind of a test, to see whether I was out of practice.

I am so out of practice :P

I like it. It's a nice love song with a feminine touch.

to me it seems more straight up poetry than a song.. i can picture me at a poetry reading and hear someone reading something like this...i do like it however, and hope you dont take it as something its not..and i agree with Jim, it definitely has a woman's touch

keep writting...your not as out of touch or practice as you think!!!

This song is a diamond in the rough. When I try to imagine what kind of music could go with these lyrics, I come up with 'If You Don't Know Me By Now' by Harold Melvin and the Blue Notes.

Very Door-ish!If you can think out of the box Music,it works.