Lyric help..Please..Couple of Kids (Lost on the Road)

hey there.. im kinda bummed here. i wrote this song last year and am still stuck.... it has a Toby Kieth bullets in the gun sound....kinda..or maybe a better comparison would be Cory Morrows "Love me like you use to"


i really need help with the bridge..looking to tell another part of the two kids story, maybe something contrasting to the verses or possibly shed a little more light on their crazy and wild ride??????

..any help would be greatly appreciated..also any comments on the song are more than welocme....thanks so much

Couple of Kids (Lost on the Road)
Jeff Coral 2012
Key C#

1: the town was small and I don’t know how you came up on me girl you spun me around
You looked me in the eye said hang on tight, don’t you know boy you’re in for the ride of your life
So I grabbed my tequila and shot it down Jumped in the truck girl and we left town
We tore down the road shooting gravel in the sky Don’t you know you’re in for the ride of your life

Pre Chorus: You and me running around no there aint no turning around

Chorus:
Oh the breeze kicks up and the sun goes down
Wild side comes out as we hit town
We hit it hard with nowhere to go
Just a couple of kids getting lost on the road
Couple of kids getting lost on the road

2: we set fire to the sky it was a roaring blaze we jumped off the roof and ran for the gate
Them town folk stood idly by They scratched their heads and they wondered why
We jumped back in the truck sped across kings creek them town folk and police oh they’re bringing heat
We killed the lights we held our breath, they turned right oh and we turned left

Bridge:???

Just two hundred miles to the border
Freedom was in our sight
We lived for the moment
That night we began
To live for the thrill of the ride

Take it or leave it, just an idea

right on brother thanks for the reply and words..i think i can def use it and turn it in to a bridge

RockinRustle has come up with a great verse.I think it would work well with what you already wrote!

Originally Posted by Doug Denslowe

RockinRustle has come up with a great verse.I think it would work well with what you already wrote!

i agree. as soon as i get home later on today im going to re visit and put to the pen to the paper