Live Today

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  1. Johnb31's Avatar

    Johnb31 said:

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    Isn't weird how
    Life goes so fast
    Isn't weird how
    Nothing lasts
    In this world
    In this heart
    We are fading away
    "Chorus"
    When we die
    Time will carry on
    The clock will keep
    Ticking
    The sun will rise and fall
    As if nothing happened
    And we will fade away
    So why don't you
    Why don't you
    Live today

    Isn't weird how
    We work our whole lives
    We disguise
    Our displeasure
    Our desire for more
    And the hope that we
    Won't be ignored
    "Chorus"
    When we die
    Time will carry on
    The clock will keep
    Ticking
    The sun will rise and fall
    As if nothing happened
    And we will fade away
    So why don't you
    Why don't you
    Live today
    "Bridge"
    Live today
    Live today
    Live today
    Live right now
    Stand up look around
    Do you see this world
    Do you see the beauty
    Now just live life to eternity
    "Chorus"
    When we die
    Time will carry on
    The clock will keep
    Ticking
    The sun will rise and fall
    As if nothing happened
    And we will fade away
    So why don't you
    Why don't you
    Live today
    There is not enough space or time to truly let the song unwind
     
  2. Doug Denslowe's Avatar

    Doug Denslowe said:

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    This is so Grassroots.....sha,la.la,la,la,live for today,and your worries about tomorrow,hey,hey,hey!So.....I loves this!Anything that can take me back to the "good ole days" is a winner in my eyes!One thing though,why doesn't your sun,set!In this, it "falls" which is cool, if it had a great rhyme attached.......
     
  3. Johnb31's Avatar

    Johnb31 said:

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    Haven't thought of a rhyme for that yet haha
    There is not enough space or time to truly let the song unwind
     
  4. Doug Denslowe's Avatar

    Doug Denslowe said:

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    By the way........HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
     
  5. Johnb31's Avatar

    Johnb31 said:

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    Thank you Doug. HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!
    There is not enough space or time to truly let the song unwind
     
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    coral834 said:

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    I think Doug hit the nail on the with his "grassroots" comparison. I couldn't agree more..
     
  7. Justin Sylver's Avatar

    Justin Sylver said:

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    Ironically, I have a song with the same title. I think they both express the need of living for today upside worrying about the past or being anxious about the future, but you took a slightly different approach. This is just my quick reworking of it.

    Isn't it weird how time passes by so fast?
    From dust to dust and ash to ash
    I've come to know that nothing ever lasts
    And I cry out with a bitter plea
    For in this world, and in my heart,
    I feel the pull of another fading away

    But the clock, the clock will keep ticking
    Even after the big hand strikes noon
    I'll say, "Wait, you've gone too soon,"
    But the clock, the clock will keep ticking
    Before you and go and fade away
    Promise me you'll live for today
     
  8. Johnb31's Avatar

    Johnb31 said:

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    Wow that was a really nice rework of the song I love that. I'm not really sure where I'm gonna take this song musically yet but what you wrote has given me some ideas for this song thank you so much.
    There is not enough space or time to truly let the song unwind
     
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    Yeah, I'm glad I could help. If you come up with a good riff to go along with it, I'd like to hear it.