ending line

hi Smiley here is a bridge missing and I'm not quite sure if 'ending line' is rthe right term for what the song is about ? anyway here's the lyrics:

It was the best time i had
You’re the one i would give my life for
And i could get lost in your eyes all the time
But i know better than you it wouldn’t work out
so this is our last goodbye

cause it‘s the ending line
it’s the end title of a great movie
it’s the ending note of our favourite song
and I’m standing here with tears in my eyes
but it’s the ending line

we really had somethjing
i would run away and never come back with you
i know your arm will catch me if i fall
buit i know better than you it wouldn’t work out
so this is our last goodbye

cause it‘s the ending line
it’s the end title of a great movie
it’s the ending note of our favourite song
and I’m standing here with tears in my eyes
but it’s the ending line

Jane, you're showing much promise. Such a romantic!

Short and sweet!I know if the right melody is attached,this could move mountains.I might try to take out some of the "ending" and try another word,but maybe I'm just wrong!Great write!

The song that pops up in my mind is 'Heartbreak Warfare' by John Mayer. With a melody like that, this song could be a real winner.

when the line "but it's the ending line" shows up for the first time, I imagine a Florence and the Machine type drum beat kick in. Good job!

Originally Posted by StripedSweater

when the line "but it's the ending line" shows up for the first time, I imagine a Florence and the Machine type drum beat kick in. Good job!

Right now I'm listening to 'No light, no light', and It convinces me that your suggestion is definitely better than mine!