Hung Up and Hung Over (4/11/10)

Fun Fact: Aside from poetry, this was the first actual song I ever wrote!!



She is so not right for you,
I dont know what to say or do,
to make you see that she's a fake,
you're putting up with more than you should take.
all her lies and empty promises,
can't you see this for what it really is?

you're hung up while she's hung over
and its just not right,
she's only using you.
she's so wrong, but you're so right,
why dont you give up this fight?
and let the battle be over?
cause its tearin you apart,
i could tell from the start,
that she's gonna break your heart

you're the perfect guy, you're every girl's dream,
but when you're around her it makes me wanna scream!
you think you got her figured out,
but you dont know what that girl's about.
i wish that i could make you see,
you are a hurricane and i am a tree,
you blow me away!

you're hung up while she's hung over
and its just not right,
she's only using you.
she's so wrong, but you're so right,
why dont you give up this fight?
and let the battle be over?
cause its tearin you apart,
i could tell from the start,
that she's gonna break your heart

It doesn't have to tear you apart,
Dont let her break your heart

But now she's hung up and you're hung over,
and its all your fault.
dont let her take your heart,
dont let her break your heart,
just let go...

Another good one!Keep up the good work!love the hurricane line,you blow me away!

Masterful! I don't have any idea what it should sound like musically, but these lyrics just roll. And I definitely "hear" a fade-out, whether it's totally musical or an echo of the last line. I caught the title just random-browsing "New Posts", and boom, there it is. A song!

I dunno what genre you have in mind, but (not that I listen to C&W at all any more, but) this has got Clint Black written all over it. Yes? No? How 'bout Muse?

Originally Posted by MoonRide*r*

Masterful! I don't have any idea what it should sound like musically, but these lyrics just roll. And I definitely "hear" a fade-out, whether it's totally musical or an echo of the last line. I caught the title just random-browsing "New Posts", and boom, there it is. A song!

I dunno what genre you have in mind, but (not that I listen to C&W at all any more, but) this has got Clint Black written all over it. Yes? No? How 'bout Muse?

Thanks
Hmm.. Im thinking more Muse, but maybe a bit "pop" too.. I do like some Clint Black too, didn't even think of something like that, but I like it! Who knows :P Maybe someday I'll figure it out

Kerri. Im Sally and I live his life, my man is a liar with much more strife, constant provokation n argument, violence and ill bend over and....let him **** me up the *** figuritively

My man constantly ****s women behind my back, is violent, deceitful, selfish, impatient and inconciderate. The hell n sad pain it has caused=has made me so wise, so hard n such a sexua explorer ****. I was nobody and nothing.

You get right to the point, and you are going through a prolific period. Is this in the style of Taylor Swift?

Originally Posted by Jim Colyer

You get right to the point, and you are going through a prolific period. Is this in the style of Taylor Swift?

Actually, I can see that! Especially with her country pop sound. I guess you could say that!