Maze

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  1. Thatsmeonthetrain's Avatar

    Thatsmeonthetrain said:

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    Verse one:
    Maybe I jumped in this way too fast
    Cuz now I'm doubting if this love will last

    Your silent ways, make life feel like a maze
    And I'm afraid I will get trapped.

    Chorus:
    All I know is when I'm with you
    The stars align like their suppose too
    I'm counting the days, waiting for you to walk away
    But all this time you've been here...

    Verse two:
    Maybe all of this is in my mind
    I'm spinning in circles watching time go by

    Your silent ways, make life feel like a maze
    And I'm afraid I am trapped.

    Chorus:
    All I know is when I'm with you
    The stars align like their suppose too
    I'm counting the days, waiting for you to walk away
    But all this time you've been here....

    Bridge:
    I'm lost in this maze that I've created
    Searching for a way out
    Your calling my name, leading me too you
    The only thing stopping me is doubt...

    Chorus:
    All I know is when I'm with you
    The stars align like their suppose too
    I'm counting the days, waiting for you to walk away
    But all this time youve been here...
    Last edited by Thatsmeonthetrain; 01-10-2014 at 09:21 PM.
     
  2. Johnb31's Avatar

    Johnb31 said:

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    Hey train girl welcome back ;-). I wonder who this lovely song is about haha ;-). I love it it has some great rhymes in it good job now write more!!
    There is not enough space or time to truly let the song unwind
     
  3. Doug Denslowe's Avatar

    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Choo!Choo!
     
  4. Peter Both said:

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    This song reads like a page from your diary. Makes me want to read more pages. "Your silent ways, make life feel like a maze" is absolutely a wonderful line!!
     
  5. Thatsmeonthetrain's Avatar

    Thatsmeonthetrain said:

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    Thanks a ton boys!