outlaw love song

I met her on a journey
A layover at LAX
we hid out in the alleys
Dont get me started on the sex
We dug our food from the trash
Such a primitive cuisine
Spanging on the strip for cash
A punk rock angel you know what I mean

This is an outlaw
song of love
For the girl who fits me
like a glove
an outlaw love song
for the girl who righted
all my wrongs

Theres something bout a girl
That you meet on the street
Thats gets you high and blows your mind
With her tattoos piercings and tattered jeans
Once you taste the venom
Youre hooked for life
Youd kill a million other men
Just to make her your wife

This is an outlaw
song of love
for the girl who fits me
like a glove
an outlaw love song
for the girl who righted
all my wrongs

But I moved away
She chose to stay
A resident of the urban decay
Still roaming the streets of that wretched la
I hope our paths'll cross again one day
Til then this burdens mine to pay
A loner livin the outlaw way
Til once again next to her I lay

This is an outlaw
song of love
for the girl who fits me
like a glove
an outlaw love song
for the girl who righted
all my wrongs

I like the story. I may have phrased some of it differently but all in all it's a pretty good song. Good work.

Thanks =) Bits and pieces of it are actually did happen, other bits and pieces of it are what would have happened it if weren't for circumstances I had no control over, and then I padded it with artistic liberty, damn I miss that girl