he'll never catch me now

I woke up this morning bout half past five
to hear that old train rollin down the line
I heard that old whistle moanin the blues
found myself wearing holes in the souls of my boots

I stumbled down the stairs I was cursin the morn
grabbed my morning coffee snuck out the back door
took that city bus to the outskirts of town
your daddy's never gonna catch me now

he'll never catch me now
not no way, not no how
he'll never catch me now
I'm in another town

just another night out on the road
someone else's bed to let off my load
another grimy burned out motel room
lying next to someone girl I wish it was you

girl I wish it was you
bet you wish it was too
girl I wish it was you
I was making love to

but I left you a thousand miles behind
a thousand miles down them old steel lines
but keep in mind they come back around
I'll see you next time I'm in town

next time I'm in town
girl I'll see you around
next time I'm in town
He'll never catch me now

he'll never catch me now
not no way, not no how
he'll never catch me now
I'm in another town

This piece tells a really good story. Despite that story being a little sad, I think it's one that a lot of people can identify with even if they choose not tho recognize it themselves. I think you did a really good job on this piece, and that it shows a lot of true, raw emotion. There's really no flaws for me to pick at here. It's damn near perfect.