By The Way (I Thank You)

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  1. 2numbers said:

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    It's time for you to hear me
    Listen to what I say
    Its been about you
    This is my day
    My eyes are opened
    You showed me my way
    I'm better in spite of you
    This is where I lay

    By the way, I thank you
    For my heart on the floor
    By the way, I thank you
    You could have done more
    By the way, I thank you
    For what you didn't say
    Left me with no hope
    I thank you, By the way

    Never about me, in the end
    All you ever needed was
    Just a simple friend
    I only did what a friend does
    The words you throw aroud
    The feelings that they make
    Its not what I wanted
    So soon, so much to take

    By the way, I thank you
    For my heart on the floor
    By the way, I thank you
    You could have done more
    By the way, I thank you
    For what you didn't say
    Left me with no hope
    I thank you, By the way

    Show me who you are
    As you walk away
    Show me why you did
    What you did today
    Nevermind
    I grew up
    And thank you
    By the way

    By the way, I thank you
    For my heart on the floor
    By the way, I thank you
    You could have done more
    By the way, I thank you
    For what you didn't say
    Left me with no hope
    I thank you, By the way
     
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    BackInBlack said:

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    Great write bro! I love the line "By the way, I thank you". To the point, very accessible and reads like it's already a hit... if that makes sense to you. Re proof read it though. There's one typo.
     
  3. meli2235 said:

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    Haha sounds like the aftermath of my song lol I like it