Treasures of a Woman

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  1. kerkenat said:

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    (12/8 time)

    Sailing away on my own,
    not so sure where I be bound
    turning and twisting, lurching and listing
    just sorta floating around.

    Waving goodbye to my fam'ly, .
    pleasant regards!

    Along comes this girl, insecurity soars
    Good Lord!, she's coming aboard
    and her cases all filled with moral support
    kindness, and friendship, all that and more

    Romance and tenderness, fun and delight
    tacit acceptance, tactful advice
    just a soft breeze filling my sails so wide
    She says: "I'll be the tail, boy, you be the kite"

    Briny blue seas! scuffing my tennies so bashfully

    the Treasures of a woman
    take them if you can
    untold wealth is waiting for the wise and worthy man

    Treasures of a woman,
    honor her and then
    can you possibly measure the mountain of treasure
    found in the heart of a happy satisfied woman?

    Caught in a whirlpool, circling down
    Good Lord, am I gonna drown
    She pulls me away from impending doom
    Steering me safely into the lagoon

    guidance, common intuitive sense
    holds me together time and again,
    Like a sturdy dock, or comf'torble slip
    She say's "I'll be the tug, hon, you be the ship

    Shiver me timbers! Sailor surrendering life on the sea

    the Treasures of a woman
    take them if you can
    untold riches are waiting for the wise and worthy man

    Treasures of a woman
    honor her and then
    can you possibly measure the mountain of treasure
    found in the heart of a happy satisfied woman?

    Though she keeps me safe from harm
    she's worried and alarmed
    you know some of my rust and barnacles are beginning to show

    She says they got to go!
    no way to tell her no
    so she's stubbornly rubbing, chipping and scrubbing
    stem to stern
    just to make me sparkle and glow

    Treasures of a woman
    take them if you can
    untold wealth is waiting for the wise and worthy man

    Treasures of a woman
    honor her and then
    you'll uncover the pleasures and glittering treasures
    that dwell in the soul of a happy satisfied woman?

    Treasures of a woman
    honor her, young man
    you'll discover the pleasures, glittering treasure
    found in the heart of a grateful satisfied woman?

    Purity and grace
     
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    andreasfromUSA said:

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    found in the heart of a happy satisfied woman?
    Not to fiddle with your artistic expression, but I'd consider changing happy to an adverb such as happily. Or stick an and between happy and satisfied.
     
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    Kerri Faye Yates said:

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    Though it feels a bit long, I love that I can picture it in my head!
    ~Kerri Faye