Ghosts Of Our Past or Forever Haunted

Not sure which title yet. It's just the chorus so far.

Verse 1
On cloudless days
Hand in hand
We would run
The air rushing through my hair
Laughing without a care
Wishing time would stop
If only it could have stopped

Chorus
The ghosts of our past
Seem to haunt me
Why didn't you let our love last
Didn't you think I had the right to know
How could you have hurt me so?
Your actions stung like never before
Over and over and over you swore
I was the only one you ever wanted
Now my heart is forever haunted

Verse 2
On a blanket we would lay
Side by side
Making plans
You kissed me and said
You would make me your bride
I was so happy that I cried
I should have known better

Chorus
The ghosts of our past
Seem to haunt me
Why didn't you let our love last
Didn't you think I had the right to know
How could you have hurt me so?
Your actions stung like never before
Over and over and over you swore
I was the only one you ever wanted
Now my heart is forever haunted

Having a little trouble arranging it and finally settled on this. Does it make sense? I am working on the 3rd verse still.

It does make sense, yes be critical to yourself. You will eventually land on a solution