Hi! Because of personal problems I hav'nt been writing or posting any songs...I'm just now starting to get the inspiration back!
Im now struggeling a song...I'll post what I've got,and you guys tell me if its worth further work or not! If you have any suggestions...please be my guest and let me know
Love MissMay3
"Like the shadows of the sun
I'm standing in the cold
longing for a warm and tender hand to hold
Does anyone wanna pick up the pices of a broken soul
Its been a while since I had
a smile on my face
felt the warm embrace
of that special one
There is a place in my heart
thats cold and dark
It's where I keep the hurt and pain
a place I promise you
you'll never go again"
I know it needs some work with rhymes and stuff...but is it worth the work?