Hi guys...its been almost a year since I last posted a song...

Hi! Because of personal problems I hav'nt been writing or posting any songs...I'm just now starting to get the inspiration back!
Im now struggeling a song...I'll post what I've got,and you guys tell me if its worth further work or not! If you have any suggestions...please be my guest and let me know

Love MissMay3

"Like the shadows of the sun
I'm standing in the cold
longing for a warm and tender hand to hold
Does anyone wanna pick up the pices of a broken soul

Its been a while since I had
a smile on my face
felt the warm embrace
of that special one

There is a place in my heart
thats cold and dark
It's where I keep the hurt and pain
a place I promise you
you'll never go again"

I know it needs some work with rhymes and stuff...but is it worth the work?

Of course it's worth finishing! It's difficult to start back up once you've stopped but don't give up. I put mine on hold for 10 years and it took a while to warm up but now it seems like I'm posting one a tleast every couple of weeks plus bits and pieces to songs that I started and haven't finished yet . For rhyming you should play with words. That's what I do and a lot of times it works. Write a random word down and try to make a rhyme with it. I find it fun and sometimes it inspires me. Also rhymebrain.com has a thingy where you can enter a word and it gives you a list of words that rhyme and words that rhyme closely. I use it and it helps a lot . Haha had to edit. I hate typing on cellphones lol