Clickety Clack

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Thoughts go spinning
Thru time and space
The laws of physics
No longer embrace

Find yourself hitchhiking
On stardust trail
Everything crumbles
Like yesterday's mail

Clickety Clickety
Clickety Clack
Midnight Sun
Is coming back

Ask the Watcher
Which way to go
He simply shrugs
"I don't know"

Dr.Strange floats by
And gives you a wink
Reality collapses
Awaken in the sink

Written 3/23/2014

Yes! Great follow-up to Midnight Sun indeed! I am duly impressed, Doug. This poem is even tighter, with great metaphors, visuals, and even your (signature, but) unexpected "last-word" surprise!

Originally Posted by Frankie Jasmine

Yes! Great follow-up to Midnight Sun indeed! I am duly impressed, Doug. This poem is even tighter, with great metaphors, visuals, and even your (signature, but) unexpected "last-word" surprise!

When you wrote that "I should write more Poetry" (Midnight Sun Comment #12)I came up with this.The "problem" is these poems/songs used to just "come to me" if you know what I mean.I never sat down and said,"I shall write a song!"It came SO easy,I started to think that it was always going to be like that!I finally found my well dried up,and I had to put some effort and thought into my pieces.NOTE:I paused for a moment and this just dawned on me:When I was writing before,I was also playing and singing with guitar players and the "vibe" of participating in music may have been the spark that lit the fuse........if you get my meaning.Now,I'm playing music on an ipod,when I take my daily strolls.Not quite the same energy to create.Anyhow,hopefully,if I ever start playing
music again,it'll come back without the struggle it's been lately.If I'm forced to write something it's not as organic as if I have it "come from space"!!!(You,the reader,can fill in the word "space" with something more suited to your liking.)