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  1. 2numbers said:

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    This is just a white screen
    Waiting for my art
    Begging for my mind
    To tear something apart
    Show someone something
    Just let my mind rage
    After a few scribbles
    I tear out the page

    I can't put it down right now
    Stuck between here and gone
    I want you to know
    But I can't write this song

    It's all there for you to see
    But it all goes away with me
    Powerhouse conceptions
    Like a chef's confections
    With just a read and a lie
    I hold your heart in my hand
    Still there are no words
    Like an Idiot I stand

    I can't put it down right now
    Stuck between here and gone
    I want you to know
    But I can't write this song

    I feel it building
    I feel it growing
    It eats me alive
    Without me knowing
    Teases me today
    Shows me her lines
    Walks so far away
    Like so many times

    I can't put it down right now
    Stuck between here and gone
    I want you to know
    But I can't write this song
     
  2. MissMay3 said:

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    Great song. I like how you write and get your message through.
     
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    Kerri Faye Yates said:

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    I wish there were a "love" button!
    ~Kerri Faye
     
  4. 2numbers said:

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    Thank you for the kind words. I let the lack of inspiration BE the inspiration. But I suppose that was obvious....
     
  5. Teshka's Avatar

    Teshka said:

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    The more i read this the more i realize how brilliantly you lyricized the 'obvious'.....and there is more that i want to say but 'I can't' find the words
    Music is what feelings sound like
    Listen to the Love
    ~♥♥~