My.Dedication

You strive/
You reach it/
You dive/
You're sinkin'/
You're alive/
But not breathin'/
This time/
You mean it/
The lies/
Deceivin'/
But this time/
You believe it/
They're blind/
But I see it/
Yeah I see it/
And I think you should chase your dreams/
Make it happen/
Take all the things that seem to bring you down/
And pick them up/
Break the bad/
And watch as they all crash into the ground/
Take a stand, and leave those stands/
Be the one that won't wait for the crowd/
You're a rockstar with no band/
But I'm right here if you need a fan/
Go H.A.M./
Go all out/
Make a change that'll make them proud/
When the stakes are high, keep faith in the clouds/
Take your base, fate'll play the mound/
I know you're afraid of the way it sounds/
Don't evade tomorrow, escape from now/
Place that bet/
Play that hand/
Can't let it come to be a wasted round/
Because you've come so far/
Look how tall you've grown/
Can't stop now though, there's far more to go/
Though your heart aches, and you're cold/
Out on your own/
You're far from alone/
It don't gotta show/
Nope I already know/
I just hope you can tell that the hard part is gone/
Though you sometimes feel what the scars won't show/
There's someone out there that shares a part of your soul/
Let go, and let's live
Let go of it, and let GOD/
Go off, and go get/
But don't forget about what you've got/
Forget, and forgive/
Because time ain't slowing down, and won't stop/
Be cool, and be patient/
You're a star, this is my dedication..

Holy dam that's petty epic pal. Well written

These are some really great lyrics!! I'd love to hear it performed.

Hey thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate it!

I like this style!
Straight forward and clear as a sky in spring!
It kind of surprised me.
Good thinking!
Keep going....

Hey thanks for reading! You keep going as well