Perfect in The Heat/ Stella, The Car's Out Back

Stella, The Car's Out Back:

Stella would you follow me home
If I bought you all the things you dream about, that I can’t afford
If I gave you the shirt and the burden off my back
Every breath that ever haunted me,
I’d give to you

I can break your heart if you want me to
For you,
I can break your heart if you want me to

Stella I’ll be that dark figure hanging on your wall
I might stumble my baby but I’ll never crawl
Drown our worries in the river and we’ll be laughing too

We’re still lying on the rusted hoods of imaginary cars
Taking turns abandoning those dreams that we had
I’ll be the one you need when you’re falling apart
But baby it’s gonna stop at that

The drive in screens weren’t watching us laugh
They’ve been torn down, stripped and the woods stacked in back
We’re falling apart but we'll tame that dogs wild bark
All the thieves in the night just don’t know where to start
Tell your saviours your sins when you see them

For you,
I can break your heart if you want me to
For you,
Stella I can still break your heart if you want me to

Stella I’ll be that dark figure hanging on your wall
Behind your mother’s faded cracked porcelain dolls
Stella I’ll be that figure hanging on your wall
Behind your mother’s faded cracked porcelain dolls

Stella for you, we can go paint them city streets with all the things we thought we knew
And then for you, Stella I can still break your heart if you want me to

I like em, kinda like springsteen meets american recordings era johnny cash,

A lovely line I noticed: "Stella,I'll be that figure hanging on your wall
behind your mother's faded cracked porcelain dolls"

A real treasure of words that is! It ain't easy to get something as touchy as that said in so few words.
To my taste though, the whole poem/song is therefore too long, cause this is such a beautiful line.
Still: thanks

Thats what I thought at first amaryan, but he's actually got 2 songs here

Yea 2 songs and they both 'read' really great!! and RockinRustle I totally agree with your first comment as well.

nxbeauchamp it looks like you have a genuine flair for writing, this really is really good.

thanks alot everybody