What do you think of my lyrics?

My heart gets heavier
when I think about
How much it hurts to you
seeing me so down
But I can't help to blame you somehow
because you weren't strong enough
to stand still watching me fall
Because you hold my hand
and ask me to open up my heart
You said you could help me
To forget it all, rise and restart

Why can't you stop loving me?
Why don't you just let me be?
I hate you for loving me
And I hate myself for hating you

But don't you dare
Don't you cry a single tear
Cause that's way more than I can bear
How do you dare
saying my gloom is wrecking you
Can't you see I'm not that strong.

3rd line the "to" needs to be taken out
Instead of "because you hold my hand" try " you held my hand"
Other then that the lyrics are powerful and moving

Originally Posted by trueperfectionisimperfect

3rd line the "to" needs to be taken out
Instead of "because you hold my hand" try " you held my hand"
Other then that the lyrics are powerful and moving

Thank you very much! That was very helpful!

Very emotional, honest and open!