..kinosamtalen II‏

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    An echo in the nearing stillness...




    "Just why wouldn't you let it go?"

    "How many times have I told you to shut up?"




    There are more to it, than a simple conversation..


    "In times you will know, just let it be for christ sake!"

    "it was hers, not of mine!"




    And the halls of mentation, once a cinema
    drowned of the ocean still..



    "Our voices is the perfection of a vocal chord.."

    "a membrane that breathes of cordial delight.."


    "Branded is our names and these seats..


    thus we bought you..
    ..for a price"




    Tell me thy waters still
    I watch your reflection, and the voices seethe..

    am I haunted whomever died, peers into my rear?



    "would he dare to speak.."




    "..save us, and from this dreaded horror...
    I'd rate it a five!"




    No mere spectator survives the ordeals
    of a real world..



    "Give me the ways of life, and I'd watch it again..
    until porn and luxury instead..."




    the murk slows a caterpillar

    yet he finds a way..

    nor sun that litters

    a vision so profound yet elapsed in time..

    -

    a thick fog stirs the mind of the bog..



    "Hit the ****ing replay, this movie sucks!"

    "no story huh... just figments I guess..."

    "I love coffee, but
    the smoke that integrates the taste..?

    as if suspended by a jerk.."



    A stranger still strange
    in a conch


    aloft the boundless sea..


    your voice..your membrane
    from an vibrant coil


    I drop thee now...

    my channel to your imaginary T.V
    &
    your channel to my imaginary scene

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    I think.....I think.....that I know exactly what you mean
    Music is what feelings sound like
    Listen to the Love
    ~♥♥~
     
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    Good, which is? :-P
     
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    maybe it just comes out of my own angst about almost everything and it may seem overly exotic, but as i read this i get the feeling of a pair of unanchored and misdirected post-modern vortices (could insert multiple symbolisms here) with me in between....observing extremes and trying to make some kind of sense of one or the other in relation to who i am or where i come from...but that just makes everything seem even more stupid, corrosive, self-serving and destructive, and so i'm just walking away from the whole mess before it consumes me as well. That's my overall take, and once again it may just be my own frame of mind
    Music is what feelings sound like
    Listen to the Love
    ~♥♥~
     
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    Your own frame of mind on this is anything I could ask for and I feel honored...that it's not just a selection of randomness but rather unconscious(mind) conversations at the bottom of the sea which can somehow be related to alot of things, lol. Anyways, I tried not to think whilst writing most of the lines...and just imagine what people would randomly speak about in a cinema. And the intersection in the middle carrying the main arc of the story...
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    Quote Originally Posted by Eccer View Post
    Your own frame of mind on this is anything I could ask for and I feel honored...that it's not just a selection of randomness but rather unconscious(mind) conversations at the bottom of the sea which can somehow be related to alot of things, lol. Anyways, I tried not to think whils writing most of the lines...and just imagine what people would randomly speak about in a cinema. And the intersection in the middle carrying the main arc of the story...

    Good job Eccer!
    "Gilgamesh, where are you hurrying to?
    You will never find that life for which you are looking.
    When the gods created man they allotted to him death,
    but life they retained in their own keeping"