Window (From: ImmaRandy =] Free to leave replies...)

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  1. immarandy said:

    Post Window (From: ImmaRandy =] Free to leave replies...)

    <Verse1>
    Lights are blinking
    One of us alone standing on the street
    Middle of the night
    I lose my heart
    Crying for pain
    Blood flow in my vein

    <Chorus>
    Iím alone
    Looking at window
    Blur sight
    I canít see you there
    Picture on table makes me cry
    Yelling for help but no oneís there

    <Verse2>
    Winds are blowing
    One of us alone sitting on the bench
    Middle of the night
    I lose my heart
    Crying for pain
    Blood flow in my vein

    <Chorus>
    Iím alone
    Looking at window
    Blur sight
    I canít see you there
    Picture on table makes me cry
    Yelling for help but no oneís there

    <Verse3>
    Forgive what Iíve lost
    Feels the way you love me
    Forgive what Iíve lost
    Feels the way you love me
    Forgive what Iíve lost
    Feels the way you love me
     
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    JJCory3 said:

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    I apologize if this comes off wrong, but is English your first language? I ask because this is a good piece, hindered only by some grammatical issues.
     
  3. immarandy said:

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    Ya...my first language...sorry for the grammatical issues
    Last edited by immarandy; 08-05-2014 at 09:19 PM.