Originally Posted by
tzina772000
I will correct them rv65, but if you already knew
I don't know if the lilly flowers are fiori di lilla, I left that as it was. fiori di lilla are those flowers that are of colour lilac, so if they are called lilly flowers then it's ok.
arabianofelix the translations you did were not that bad.Some advice: don't forget the pronouns(it would be again a correct translation but not that good in English), don't try to find fancy words in English, sometimes a simpler word is the correct one or better for the meaning you want to express.If you have any questions please ask.