"i.m."

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    BackInBlack said:

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    Becoming the anti archetypical
    Steadily reaching for the pinnacle
    Upon the backs of the cynical
    Fueled by all of these chemicals
    So say goodbye to the old and draped
    And then say hello to the golden state
    The used up shell will fold and break
    And what comes forth is bold and great
    I will not falter in this alteration
    Though it's sure to cause altercations
    There will be no cessation of this occupation
    I'm sorry if this has got you pacing
    But it's my destiny to rise above the fray
    And just say whatever I love to say
    Pretty soon it wont be enough to pray
    Y'all better hope you don't come my way

    It's Icon Morphogenesis
     
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    This reminds me ao much of how i love to play with words. But you're the expert, so prolific and so often perfect and this is a perfect demonstration of that. Love how you looped the title from the opening to the epilogue and back.
    Music is what feelings sound like
    Listen to the Love
    ~♥♥~
     
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    BackInBlack said:

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    Thank you Teshka. I appreciate such high praise. Others in the rap section don't seem to think so highly of me
     
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    Teshka said:

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    omg the rap section....I have actually gotten most of a rap written but i'm having grave doubts that i would ever post it over there
    Music is what feelings sound like
    Listen to the Love
    ~♥♥~
     
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    Don't be scared. All they can do is hate. That's what most of those guys do anyway. If you're good they hate, if you're average they hate. Hate, hate, hate. Lol. So just do it. I wanna read it.
     
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    omg wait, this is the rap section?? I caught this one in the New Posts listing and didn't even realize what section it was in.

    Ok posting, idk what the title will be yet but i may have it up on the board before you read this
    Music is what feelings sound like
    Listen to the Love
    ~♥♥~